Olafur's poem section ^_^(updated, now with pictures <3)

- Land Beyond The Sun -

Cause when the sun awaken
And all darkness is gone,
Only then can one be taken
To land beyond the sun.

It is not called a hell
Nor is it heaven,
It is a place unknown
Except for those shown.

A land so pure
Yet so destructive,
Where all wounds find cure
And everyone can live.

Gods and religions
Are storys used for greed,
Maybe they are true
What to belivie, is up to you.

Most causes war
Bring rivers both made,
Of gold and blood
Then it merely brings hate.

This plane has none such things
No drinking side of Gods,
No praying to your entity
Merely freedom and peace, to thee.

It is not a land of grass
Nor skyes or sea,
No mountain pass
Nor deserts to see.

Like the planet
Who suddenly came to be,
Everything started at seconds
Earth was its name to be.

Like the blue star
Who floats eternely,
Both darkness and light
Pain, suffering and fright.

These things aslo exist
Along with kindness and good,
All are there to those who come
To the land, beyond the sun.

Written\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum

This is a poem i wrote about 10min ago and im sorry if its not to good but i was in a hurry since i gotta meet up at my new job in like 15min . Anyway! this poem is written to you Magista, your a great leader and a even more magnificent man.

- Olaf\Neko's Oath to The Wolf Lord -

Magista our leader
Strong and kind.
Bring a smile on your face
In times of joy,
But at times of war
Bloodlust begins to crawl.

That is what happens
When he lead
Smile, candy and joy
Blood of enemys we enjoy~

We are not midgars
Nor are we mankind,
We are creatures
Of the beckon night

When you strike
We bite with fang and claw,
When you pat
We smile and defend you by law.

We hug, embrace, and kiss
We know that you like this ^-^
When situation demand
By orders, we follow your hand.

Your strenght, we follow
Your virtue, we love
Your kindness, we embrace
And your passion, we retrace.

If you need us
Then we are there,
We may not know this
But forever we are
And have always been
A part, of Wolves of Geffen.

Written\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum


NekoPriest and Olafur bows to
King Magista & Queen Allie of the Wolves of Geffen.

Well im off to work, see yah guys later! Neko away! --->

my oh my, 2 poems and still not one reply? /hmm... oh well i gotten a few sweet words from the boss xD and beside im gonna post one more, but i wont post more until i get a few replys =o and until some time since these poems are not something i usualy go around posting fro others, but hey heres one of my old poems and one of my best i give you Werewolf`s First Moon!


- Werewolf`s First Moon -

I feel the cold wind blow
Into my dark and lonely cage,
The moon is about to show
The form of my rage.

Blood of other`s on the wall
I miss the sweet scent of fall,
Been so long away
Get out of this cage, if i may.

My hands smell like blood
I don`t understand why,
I`ve been, wandering in the mud
I remember people cry.

Remembering a face
Of a person i knew,
I see the moon blaze
And suddenly, remember you.

Remember people i ate
I wish there existed a cure,
And my body change`s shape
While my skin turns to fur.

I open my eye`s
Im in between some tree`s,
My mind is full of cry`s
And children that scream.

Stepping on the grass
Walking through the wood,
Walking through the mass
Of children that i butch.

I come to a house
That i recognize a bit,
I see my old couch
And a picture of a ship.

My mind goes back
To a forgotten time,
It was 12 summers ago
When God gave me another sign.

This curse of mine
It took away your lifetime.

I was a sailor
On an old broken ship,
You where a young maiden
In the holy church of Eden.

The sun rised in the east
On the day i first met you,
You had become a lovely priest
I thought, what kind of woman are you?.

My mind returns to me
I now remember,
This was a forgotten memory
That the curse, blocked for me.

I run to the place
Where we first made our kiss,
Flower`s still bloom
In a broken place like this.

The moon arise`s again
In its fullest bloom,
The white face it gives me
I fear this fullmoon.

My mind fade`s away
This has been a special day,
Over me the wolf takes
My body start`s to bleed and shake.

Anger is in my mind
Blood i wish to see,
No longer am i kind
Monster for eternety i will be.

I am a nightmare for other`s
For men, i am death
Im an avanger of nature
Hate comes from my breath.

It`s time to take my leave
Time to forget about me,
Forever i will live
Anger take`s over me.

I loved a female priest
Until my anger i unleashed,
Look at the moon and run away
Goodbye, no more words left to say.

Written\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum


The day his anger was unleashed,
and the death of his love.

Necko, very enjoyable. It created strong word pictures in my mind, keep publishing on the forum.

She likes the poem with magi in it 0.o

thoose were awesome Neko !!!Keep em Coming!!

=O!!!! momma wolf gave me a comment? YAY thank you all for the sweet words, im glad you enjoyed them ^-^ ill post more for you, hmm *looks through poem folder.....* oh! found one , now before you read the poem i want to tell you something, we all know who Sohee is? well heres a poem to our beloved, sad and heartbroken princess .


- Sohee -

This girl`s life
Her story is a sad one.

Lived as a princess
In a capital so strong,
Her father was slayen
By monster`s that dawn.

The time was war
She saw it all
That day her heart became sore,
Because she saw Death`s call.

After her death
She cried alot,
Maybe revenge
Is the only thing, she thought.

Now she wander`s the earth
For her loss she cries,
Waiting for her rebirth
While her soul die`s.

How long must she pray
Until she get`s her rest.
How many must she slay
To break Death`s test.

Sohees life was good at start
Until Death took her heart,
A sad day when it burned her home
She felt pain from her heart til bone.

Will this girl ever rest
Her soul is trapped by a leash
She will break Death`s test
And finally get to rest in peace.

Written\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum


Sohee with her now broken tiara
and a day before she
looked upon the cold face of Death.

I know i just added a new poem yesterday, but today i wrote another poem ^_^; this one is for you ChibiRei.


- I Pray to Chibi, the Mother of Wolves -

Blackness of the pits
Deeper then the deepest night,
Cruelty that exists
Come join this fight.

I give thy my body
I grant thy my soul,

Mother of all wolves
At the plane of man,
In the fields you roam
In blood, i kneel by your throne.

Kindness is your name
Cruelty is your game,
Love is your fame
As your enemy lie in vain.

I kneel here by your throne
A son of you i am,
I ask thee to join us
In the battle at hand.

I ask for your fang
In return for my loss,
Grant me thy claw and wreck
To protect my pack.

I pray to you
I ask for your help,
Assist me to protect them
From the ghouls,
Mother of All Wolves.

Written\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum

<3 Neko

Chibi who are all of those people above the name wolves of midgard?
I know that the first wizard is magi and the bs is u who is everyone else especially the sage... also is the hunter wit hthe flowers const?
and is the alchie grey?
and is the crusader negar? help me pwease..

I really enjoy reading your poems Neko, keep it up /no1

thanks man =D, all the motiviation i need to post another one soon <3, and glad you liked the poem Chibi ^^ it was ment to be liked

- A Song of Hope -

On a cold winter's night
When wings take flight
We run toward the twilight.

Fear roam the land
By one giant hand
A ruler far in the north.

He breaks and he takes
Gold and cakes
As suffering roams free.

He shakes the earth
And ends birth
As wimen and men
Die by his law.

Dark clouds come fly
As they come on by
And blackness
Covers the land.

Tears and blood
Flow as one
As hope fades away.

When hope is gone
And death has come
A light decends
From the dark.

A step of stone
Metal in tone
A man walks
To the king.

His words are peace
Love is his thought
Hes a man that
Denies to be caught!.

He picks up a blade
And stand tall strong
Not many, just one
A hero has come
For all to save the day.

Written\\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum

A mere human man, wielding a blade
confronts the King.

O.O no replys...hmm wierd <.< oh well ill probably post a lil more later xD

Sorry I just read it but good job also.

new poem to the forum, acually i wont be posting to many yet since i dont like to share em to much xD but dont worry ill keep writing some later~~ anyway this was made for a special friend of mine (check bottom)

- Buy Me -

Hard to breath it is
Fading light i see,
Leaf and glass bits
What happened to me?.

Find myself in a house
Very far from home,
What is this place?
I must resolve this case.

Look around me i did
What on earth is this,
Bottle im trapped in
And only me of my kin.

Trapped in a cage i feel
Was it me they did steal?,

Where is my nice creator
Where is my family and love?,
Why am i the only one
Who was send to this place.

A woman comes close to me
Me in the bottle she see,
Right now im afraid and shy
Me she did buy.

Is this the truth?
What this woman tell,
Creator made my beautiful youth
And cast me to hell!

Why are they so cruel
The ones who make us,

We are drawn with love
Or by a certain feeling,
Please draw us
To care and share.

Don`t go throwing us away
Because we don`t look nice,
Draw us with love and joy
Not with a heart of greed and ice.

Respect our beauty
And so will those that buy,
Tears falling down my cheek
My long lost creator i seek.

Don`t throw the others
Please my call you must heed,
Sell them with love
Not for money and greed.

We might only be paints
Brushes and annoying stains
But we do have feelings
We can help, bring hate and healing.

This is my poem to you
Respect these word`s well,
Next time you draw
Don`t send them to hell.

This one is for you Kris
From Olaf with love and a little kiss,
Take care of your love boy
Drawings are fun, happy and bring joy.

I must say farwell
I must leave you now,
Drawing`s you must sell
Undresses and goes to bed now.

Written\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum

This poem is written about a drawing that was made by a very talented and inspirational artist and person named Christine Mohr AKA Krisgoat at www.KrisGoat.com named "Buy Me".

ok heres a poem that simba wanted to sing over vent xD


- Glory Glory Random Rime -

Glory glory
In the well
Been so long
No tale to tell.

Why is what
And which is which
Now enters
A little bitch.

I don`t know
Who you are
But please don`t stay
Get far far away.

Who are you
And who am i?
Should i say
Bye-bye or hi.

I don`t know
What to say
Confused so i must
Not be conquered by lust.

Glory glory
In the well
Now i know
What story to tell.

A tale about me
Not about you
Who am i
And who are you?.

This here poem
Came just beacuse
I had fun
With riming thoughts.

So much fun
To randomly rime
Just like kids
Neither poor nor rich.

Ha ha ha
This is fun
Randomly rimes
Taste like gum

Hi hi hi
I say hi
Just like mich
Say hich.

Bla bla bla
So much to say
Bored of hearing
Words at bay.

I must stop
Riming so
Can go forever
If i wanted tho.

So here i go
Bye-bye or hi
I don`t care
This poem i share.

Written\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum

wow, when i go back onto this page i see alot of things i miss and forgot...xD i guess im getting emotional here in australia..i miss you all and the old days of RO... guess times are just changing, huh?

OMG
YOU HAVE ARRIVED !!!!!
how are you finding life here in OZ?
msn me if you get a chance
Allie

Dude! Great job! Your rhyming ability is unparalleled and I love your use of personification and advanced diction. Can't wait to hear the next soliloquy of the great Olafur! Keep em coming. (Try to get out of the four line format and experiment with unrhyming words. Many famous poems do not rhyme. The only reason that became popular was because it made them more memorable.) You can definitely write quality poems dude.

^^ thank you so much for the comment dude, and i must say that i am more impressed with you and your talent, you have a natural ability on writing amazing things, and your drawing skill is unmatched by someone like me xD.

thank you for your kind words anyhoo<3

PS: perfect timing on the comment to =O.

Ok been a while since i came here on the forum (i quit the guild and quit RO about a year ago) but anyway, since my first book is finished and im in a good mood, i come to share yet another poem, this one is from the book itself =O!!!!!!

i give all of you this poem about my first char and my best friend on RO (when both of us played and yes, Roy is my best friend in RL) from " Pirums Dream "


- Sir.Olaf & Sir.Roy -

I was born a boy
A town named Izlude,
Father's sword my toy
Just a little boy.

Raised by the sea
I was a knight to be
By knight's so brave,
Raised a no man's slave.

Sixteen of age
Swordman i was made,
Step closer to my dream
A future, my father forseen.

In hand a blade
To be stronger i craved,
Knight i wanted to be
My father, just like he.

Entered a life of travel
Alone i walked the road,
Met a man named Roy
He was surely no boy.

A swordman was he
Knight, not like me
But a Crusader to be.

For weeks we traveled
As a team, maybe
More like brothers
Him and me.

Battle's we fought
Dark and kind thoughts,
People danger, we go rescue
Kindness strenght and virtue.

After many days
And roads we walk
Prontera to Morroc
Faced alot of shock

So many faces
Some high, some low,
Eyes with tears down they flow
To them, comfort we show.

Drink and food we share
Sorrow'n kindness we bare
For those with more need,
Kindness to other's we heed.

A Knight on the road
A Crusader by my side,
Dark and light we showed
So many people, no face we hide.

I am Sir.Olaf
And he is Sir.Roy
Do we still walk the road?
Yes, no maybe..who knows.

But if you do see us
Then don't be afraid,
Come say hello
We wipe tears that flow.

Seems we are out of time
This tavern we must leave
Off to the roads again
Farwell to thee.

Written\Copyright © by: Bob Pirum


Sir.Olaf & Sir.Roy traveling a road from Geffen, which at that time was infected greatly by bandits.